1. Pace of speaking was good. 2. Volume of recording was consistent
Weaknesses
1. There was a lot of background noise in your presentation. You need to find a quieter place to record. 2. You stuttered a lot. Practice makes perfect. 3. You spoke in a monotone and too softly. Speak up. 4. You failed to include a large portion of the required information, such as how and where she met the president, the date of their marriage, whether or not she had children, how old she was when her husband was elected, the dates of her husband’s presidency, and her passions and her role in the White House. 5. You need to put more effort into your work.
Snyder
ReplyDeleteStrengths
1. Pace of speaking was good.
2. Volume of recording was consistent
Weaknesses
1. There was a lot of background noise in your presentation. You need to find a quieter place to record.
2. You stuttered a lot. Practice makes perfect.
3. You spoke in a monotone and too softly. Speak up.
4. You failed to include a large portion of the required information, such as how and where she met the president, the date of their marriage, whether or not she had children, how old she was when her husband was elected, the dates of her husband’s presidency, and her passions and her role in the White House.
5. You need to put more effort into your work.
Overall grade 22/30